This piece is going in my book, so your honest feedback is wanted and greatly appreciated.
Kiss me softly on the forehead and declare your adulation of me. Envelope my fingertips between the warm pillow-like cushions of your lips. I want to feel the arousing sensation of slow sensual kisses being distributed along my neck and shoulders, awakening my naughty epicenter. My stream of intoxicatingly warm serum overflows from provocation and excitement as you bury your face between my thighs, making me squeal from pleasurable torture.
Toss me over and playfully smack my…please, oh please take me from behind. Please don’t make me beg. It’s such a position of respected power. I feel like your damsel in distress; I trust you enough to let you have your way. You give me one breath stopping spine tingling stroke to calm me before placing me on my back.
You choose to make love to me. You opt to search my soul. I can hide nothing from you in this position; my every thought is revealed and shows on my face as you probe the deepest and innermost facets of my entity. You experiment and discover what makes me pant and moan, what feels best to me, and what causes me pain. Your main objective is to open me up so that you can release into me.
I thank you for gently prying me open so that I could liberate what you needed…
oh my... i felt almost guilty reading this! lol... it is wonderful queen! the selection of words, the order... it puts the reader right there! keep it up babe!
ReplyDeletei wonder what possible feedback I can render...this was blood pumping, especially the "bury your face between my thighs" part...that's hardcore
ReplyDelete@ Baroque
ReplyDeleteWhat's hard core about that?
Hmmm...lol.
Hey Queen, this is hot!
This is good, sexy but not too explicit. I think the word is classy. I like it.
ReplyDelete@naijalines...it's as hardcore as, taking a starving man to an all you can eat feast...you dig?
ReplyDeleteThe first and last paragraphs sounded like parts of a lab report.
ReplyDeleteNice, actually.
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is WOW that was passionate, sexy, arousing and very sensual. That was hot I could feel that one…very nice my Queen….Loved it!!!!
ReplyDeleteHOLY!!!!! For whatever reason, I thought you'd stopped posting, but thank God I found you!!!! Damn! about the post. great imagery. wow.
ReplyDeleteReciprocity....sensually stimulating, enveloping, enthralling. Dese r few words to describe d piece n I'll sure look out for dis piece in ur book."I feel like your damsel in distress; I trust you enough to let you have your way." How I love dese words!
ReplyDeletenice to see you back. the last time i was on your blog, i could not access your posts and the site was blocked.
ReplyDeletehow have u been?
Queeeeeeeeeeeen! i've missed ya....was so excited when i got your comment...:)
ReplyDeleteI love this piece....subtle, yet obvious....really classy...i like the way you worked with your words.
How have you been? and the boys?
Queeeeeeeeeeeen! i've missed ya....was so excited when i got your comment...:)
ReplyDeleteI love this piece....subtle, yet obvious....really classy...i like the way you worked with your words.
How have you been? and the boys?
Thia is deep!
ReplyDeletethis is a very beautiful piece,soo erotic....i likey!!!!!!
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