Friday, October 31, 2008

Beauty Personified




It is said that Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder

I gave you all my love

Minus one ounce
I always keep an ounce on reserve to give to myself in case of emergency

You were beautiful to me
I loved you
I’ve always loved you

I saw your arrogance, pride, insensitivity, and selfishness
I also saw your wounds, pain, and insecurities

But you were still beautiful to me
Your flaws made you all the more beautiful to me

I loved your laugh, your silliness, your eyes, your drive and ambition

More than that I loved the way I fit perfectly in your arms, my addiction to your kisses, and my sweet obsession with your smile

It is said that Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder

The beauty of my loving you lied in my ability to love you in spite of you

The reflection in your own eye lied to you and disenabled you to see me…Beauty Personified

20 comments:

  1. lovely!

    i wasn't exspecting this....it was still showing the old post.

    but ummm....i want a tulip wrap skirt! any ideas?...

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  2. *exspecting=expecting*

    i was excited about the tulip wrap skirt! lol

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  3. The reflection in your own eye lied to you and disenabled you to see me…

    where do you come up with this....

    that set it off for me!

    that is all! :)

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  4. DANG SEXXY U GREEDY, HOW U GONE HAVE 3 COMMENTS IN A ROW. LOL

    NOW ON TO QUEEN, I REALLY THINK U R WASTING UR TIME AT UR JOB, GIRL U R A WRITER. DO U HEAR ME? A WRITER!!! WHEN U GET RAW IN UR FEELINGS YOU DRAW ME IN.

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  5. Good poem, was that based on a true experience? Or is it about some fictional "King of the Castle"?
    Looking forward to reading more.

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  6. really beautiful....... i can relate to it,.... u write well gurl!

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  7. i really loved this post!!its so sensual, emotional and hmmmm gurl u know i love ur work!!xoxo

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  8. wow my sissy blew you up. Very pretty and def something I can identify with :)

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  9. sup with sexxy luv and all of the comments?? sheez! lol

    loved this one. you definitely have a way with words, queen

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  10. Queenie my love, you are now up to date on my spot. You're welcome!

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  11. i love that. it was beautiful. : )

    xoxo

    vixen

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  12. "The beauty of my loving you lied in my ability to love you in spite of you"-WORD! Im gonna have to borrow that sometime!

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  13. I'm hoping to come to Texas when Bloggers Delight hosts in Queen's part of the country. I hope you plan on participating. It would be an absolute pleasure to meet you. You are talented with the pen.

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  14. i njoyed reading this...i cud so relate!!

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  15. I didnt know you were back to blogging boo.
    Good to be here again. Missed u plenty!

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  16. Sexxy...LMAO @ your many comments. Victoria's Secret is a favorite go-to of mine for pencil shirts and sexy yet appropiate work attire. I saw a fitted tulip skirt online there.

    Lea...Girl, I'm trying to find my nitch so that I can raise the hell up outta this place! LOL. You've so stroked my ego.

    Andy...Hello and welcome! It was inspired by real life events, all of my writings are, actually. Will be stopping by your spot. Hope you don't mind ;-)

    Funms...Thank you so much babes!

    Shona...LOL. I love your comments. They're so girlfriend-like. Love ya to bits.

    A.M....She most def blew up the spot! LOL. Thank you, Hunny Bee

    Kyle...Thanks Luv. Sexxy was on it, right?! LOL

    The 2nd 68...Thank you again, handsome mister.

    Zena...I just love you loads. LOL

    Vixen...Thank you babes!

    UnNaked..Hey Beautiful Stranger. How you dey? LOL

    NDQ...LOL! Use away.

    Rich...OMG! Are you guys REALLY coming this way?! I can't wait. Just say when and I will be there with bells on!!!!!

    Ex School Nerd...I am so digging your monkier. Thank you.

    Aloofar...Thank you, senor hermoso

    Jaja...Your comments make me blush, bringing innocent smiles upon my lips.

    Princesa...Hey You!!!!!

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